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docs/placeholder-style.css

@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ h1 {
   padding: 0.2em 0.5em;
 }
 
-body > header:first-child > h1:first-child {
+body header h1:first-child {
   margin-top: 0;
 }
 

src/fragments/noscript.html

@@ -6,23 +6,24 @@
         </header>
 
         <p>
-            If you can read this &lt;noscript&gt; content, you have scripts disabled: thankfully,
+            If you're reading this text block, then you have scripts disabled: thankfully, that's
-            this site is not going to force you to turn it on just to see any content. Everything
+            perfectly fine, and this site is not going to punish you for making smart choices
-            will work just fine, you can still read the text, navigate to sections, and see the
+            around privacy and security in your browser. All the content will show  just fine,
-            graphics that are used to illustrate the concepts that individual sections talk about.
+            you can still read the text, navigate to sections, and see the graphics that are
+            used to illustrate the concepts that individual sections talk about.
         </p>
 
         <p>
             <strong>However</strong>, a big part of this primer's experience is the fact that all
             graphics are interactive, and for that to work, HTML Custom Elements need to work,
             which requires Javascript to be enabled. If anything, you'll probably want to allow
-            scripts to run just for this site, and keep blocking everything else (although that
+            scripts to run just for this site, and keep blocking everything else. Although that
-            does mean you won't see comments, which use Disqus's comment syste, and you won't get
+            does mean you won't see comments, which use Disqus's comment system, and you won't get
             convenient "share a link to the section you're reading right now" buttons, if that's
             something you like to do. You'll also be blocking my non-google pagehit tracker, which
-            lets me see who's linking to the primer, which you probably don't care about, but lets
+            lets me see who's linking to the primer; that's probably not something you care about,
-            me strike up conversations with folks who I would otherwise never know thought the
+            but it lets reach out to folks that thought the primer was worth linking to, and I
-            primer was worth linking to, and I like talking to people who care enough to link)
+            like talking to people who care enough to link.
         </p>
     </div>
 </noscript>