From abd78f2b1dd69ebd1aabfda8ae45800e4c7322bb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Dmitry V. Sokolov" <ssloy@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sun, 20 Jan 2019 18:54:28 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Updated Home (markdown)

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 Home.md | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Home.md b/Home.md
index 217c879..b877bcb 100644
--- a/Home.md
+++ b/Home.md
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ So, the goal of this step is to make sure that we can a) create an image in memo
 <img src="https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ssloy/tinyraytracer/bd36c9857305b3cbd06f5b768bb48a92df9ae68b/out.jpg"/>
 
 <h1>Step 2, the crucial one: ray tracing</h1>
-This is the most important and difficult step of the whole chain. I want to define one sphere in my code and show it on the screen without being obsessed with materials or lighting. This is how our result should look like:
+This is the most important and difficult step of the whole chain. I want to define one sphere in my code and draw it without being obsessed with materials or lighting. This is how our result should look like:
 <img src="https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ssloy/tinyraytracer/5806eb45e93dab225ab335824cbc3f537d511b28/out.jpg"/>
 
 For the sake of convenience, I have one commit per step in my repository; Github makes it very easy to view the changes made. <a href="https://github.com/ssloy/tinyraytracer/commit/5806eb45e93dab225ab335824cbc3f537d511b28">Here, for instance</a>, what was changed by the second commit.
@@ -122,13 +122,13 @@ void render(const Sphere &sphere) {
 }
 ```
 
-На этом месте рекомендую взять карандаш и проверить на бумаге все вычисления, как пересечение луча со сферой, так и заметание картинки лучами. На всякий случай, наша камера определяется следующими вещами:
+At this point, I recommend you to take a pencil and check on paper all the calculations (the ray-sphere intersection and the sweeping of the picture with the rays). Just in case, our camera is determined by the following things:
 <ul>
-<li>ширина картинки, width</li>
-<li>высота картинки, height</li>
-<li>угол обзора, fov</li>
-<li>расположение камеры, Vec3f(0,0,0)</li>
-<li>направление взора, вдоль оси z, в направлении минус бесконечности</li>
+<li>picture width</li>
+<li>picture height</li>
+<li>field of view angle</li>
+<li>camera location, Vec3f(0.0.0)</li>
+<li>view direction, along the z-axis, in the direction of minus infinity</li>
 </ul>
 
 <h1>Этап третий: добавляем ещё сфер</h1>