From 692c0d67b923dd775d85481e326f319b6ba25fec Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Nathaniel Beaver Date: Mon, 13 Jul 2015 20:22:49 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Better example of coexisting forks, and rewording. --- README.rst | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/README.rst b/README.rst index b4eaec4..cfd7d78 100644 --- a/README.rst +++ b/README.rst @@ -721,14 +721,14 @@ This would be impossibly difficult if GNOME 2 were the desktop environment of a .. [#] https://lwn.net/Articles/433409/ .. _MATE: http://mate-desktop.org/ -Such forks will either `eventually fade away`_, -continue to `coexist with their parents`_, -or even `overtake their parent project`_, -depending on the needs of the users. +A fork like MATE will either `eventually fade away`_, +continue to `coexist with its parent`_, +or even `overtake its parent`_, +depending on the needs of its users. .. _eventually fade away: http://crunchbang.org/forums/viewtopic.php?id=38916 -.. _coexist with their parents: http://www.computerworld.com.au/article/457551/dead_database_walking_mysql_creator_why_future_belongs_mariadb/ -.. _overtake their parent project: http://www.softpanorama.org/People/Stallman/history_of_gcc_development.shtml +.. _coexist with its parent project: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/OpenBSD +.. _overtake its parent: http://www.softpanorama.org/People/Stallman/history_of_gcc_development.shtml ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Crippled multi-user remote access.