From 80467d94618bc12775ab912b57c59baf3c8e63da Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Nathaniel Beaver Date: Fri, 21 Aug 2015 16:24:50 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Reword section titles to be more accurate. --- README.rst | 25 +++++++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/README.rst b/README.rst index 242425a..4b3bcca 100644 --- a/README.rst +++ b/README.rst @@ -115,9 +115,9 @@ If you are a Windows user: You may heartily disagree with substantial parts of what follows, but perhaps it may be useful to you, even so. -++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ -Technical deficiencies of Windows relative to Linux. -++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ +Intrinsic technical deficiencies of Windows ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ------------------------ Live booting is lacking. @@ -561,13 +561,13 @@ which was designed as a multi-user system. This means that, for example, a read-only folder cannot have files added to it, and read-only files cannot be moved, renamed, or deleted without first removing the read-only status. -++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ -Architectural benefits of Linux. -++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ +Architectural deficiencies of Windows ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ -------------------------------------- -Debugging tools available by default. -------------------------------------- +-------------------------------- +Limited default debugging tools. +-------------------------------- .. TODO: Using the informal you here seems to be the only option. Everything else I can think of is too awkwardly phrased. @@ -598,9 +598,9 @@ so system administrators can rely on being able to use them on nearly any Linux .. _programs: http://technet.microsoft.com/en-us/sysinternals/bb896647.aspx .. _similar: http://www.intellectualheaven.com/default.asp?BH=projects&H=strace.htm ------------------------------ -More permissive file locking. ------------------------------ +--------------------------------- +Restrictive default file locking. +--------------------------------- .. TODO: Add more sources to this. @@ -653,6 +653,7 @@ Usability issues. The window manager monoculture means that accessibility improvements and user interface customization can be difficult to implement. + For example, Windows presents many configuration options in non-resizable dialog boxes. This can pose user-interface problems, especially on high-resolution monitors. [#]_ [#]_