From 2c0031b21defaa79378a04d9b80809d8516e932b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Gary Pendergast <pento@git.wordpress.org>
Date: Tue, 31 Oct 2017 00:20:58 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] About page: Tweak the privacy policy language, for clarity.

See #40794.



git-svn-id: https://develop.svn.wordpress.org/trunk@42045 602fd350-edb4-49c9-b593-d223f7449a82
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 src/wp-admin/privacy.php | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/wp-admin/privacy.php b/src/wp-admin/privacy.php
index 5e752fd13b..05f0d741b4 100644
--- a/src/wp-admin/privacy.php
+++ b/src/wp-admin/privacy.php
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 
 <p class="about-description"><?php _e( 'From time to time, your WordPress site may send data to WordPress.org &#8212; including, but not limited to &#8212; the version of WordPress you are using, and a list of installed plugins and themes.' ); ?></p>
 
-<p><?php printf( __( 'This data helps WordPress to protect your site by finding and automatically installing new updates, as well as other general enhancements. The data is also used to calculate statistics, such as those shown on the <a href="%s">WordPress.org stats page</a>.' ), 'https://wordpress.org/about/stats/' ); ?></p>
+<p><?php printf( __( 'This data is used to provide general enhancements to WordPress, which includes helping to protect your site by finding and automatically installing new updates. It is also used to calculate statistics, such as those shown on the <a href="%s">WordPress.org stats page</a>.' ), 'https://wordpress.org/about/stats/' ); ?></p>
 
 <p><?php printf( __( 'We take privacy and transparency very seriously. To learn more about what data we collect, and how we use it, please visit <a href="%s">WordPress.org/about/privacy</a>.' ), 'https://wordpress.org/about/privacy/' ); ?></p>