diff --git a/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php b/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php
index 4846b9b9ba..5b9564ecfd 100644
--- a/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php
+++ b/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ require_once ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php';
 			<?php
 			printf(
 				/* translators: %s: https://wordpressfoundation.org/trademark-policy/ */
-				__( 'WordPress grows when people like you tell their friends about it, and the thousands of businesses and services that are built on and around WordPress share that fact with their users. We are flattered every time someone spreads the good word, just make sure to <a href="%s">check out our trademark guidelines</a> first.' ),
+				__( 'WordPress grows when people like you tell their friends about it, and the thousands of businesses and services that are built on and around WordPress share that fact with their users. The WordPress community is flattered every time someone spreads the good word, just make sure to <a href="%s">check out the WordPress Foundation trademark guidelines</a> first.' ),
 				'https://wordpressfoundation.org/trademark-policy/'
 			);
 			?>
diff --git a/src/wp-admin/includes/class-wp-privacy-policy-content.php b/src/wp-admin/includes/class-wp-privacy-policy-content.php
index 04aee97aac..724a0dcf64 100644
--- a/src/wp-admin/includes/class-wp-privacy-policy-content.php
+++ b/src/wp-admin/includes/class-wp-privacy-policy-content.php
@@ -333,7 +333,7 @@ final class WP_Privacy_Policy_Content {
 			return;
 		}
 
-		$message = __( 'Need help putting together your new Privacy Policy page? Check out our guide for recommendations on what content to include, along with policies suggested by your plugins and theme.' );
+		$message = __( 'Need help putting together your new Privacy Policy page? Check out the guide for recommendations on what content to include, along with policies suggested by your plugins and theme.' );
 		$url     = esc_url( admin_url( 'options-privacy.php?tab=policyguide' ) );
 		$label   = __( 'View Privacy Policy Guide.' );
 
diff --git a/src/wp-admin/options-privacy.php b/src/wp-admin/options-privacy.php
index 92de2ca9b9..33e59b4601 100644
--- a/src/wp-admin/options-privacy.php
+++ b/src/wp-admin/options-privacy.php
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ wp_admin_notice(
 		}
 		printf(
 			/* translators: 1: Privacy Policy guide URL, 2: Additional link attributes, 3: Accessibility text. */
-			__( 'Need help putting together your new Privacy Policy page? <a href="%1$s" %2$s>Check out our privacy policy guide%3$s</a> for recommendations on what content to include, along with policies suggested by your plugins and theme.' ),
+			__( 'Need help putting together your new Privacy Policy page? <a href="%1$s" %2$s>Check out the privacy policy guide%3$s</a> for recommendations on what content to include, along with policies suggested by your plugins and theme.' ),
 			esc_url( admin_url( 'options-privacy.php?tab=policyguide' ) ),
 			'',
 			''
diff --git a/src/wp-admin/privacy.php b/src/wp-admin/privacy.php
index 88d2975f17..813cea213d 100644
--- a/src/wp-admin/privacy.php
+++ b/src/wp-admin/privacy.php
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ require_once ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php';
 		</div>
 
 		<div class="about__header-text">
-			<?php _e( 'We take privacy and transparency very seriously' ); ?>
+			<?php _e( 'WordPress.org takes privacy and transparency very seriously' ); ?>
 		</div>
 	</div>
 
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ require_once ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php';
 				<?php
 				printf(
 					/* translators: %s: https://wordpress.org/about/privacy/ */
-					__( 'We take privacy and transparency very seriously. To learn more about what data we collect, and how we use it, please visit <a href="%s">our Privacy Policy</a>.' ),
+					__( 'WordPress.org takes privacy and transparency very seriously. To learn more about what data is collected, and how it is used, please visit <a href="%s">the WordPress.org Privacy Policy</a>.' ),
 					__( 'https://wordpress.org/about/privacy/' )
 				);
 				?>